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投诉冰箱问题

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📝 题目

You have bought a refrigerator. First, you found that it was not cooling, and you had it changed. Then you found that the new one was always making noises.
Write a letter to the manager of the department store. In your letter
- describe the problem you had with the refrigerators
- say what solution you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I recently purchased a refrigerator at your establishment and have experienced issues with your product. Thus, I write to bring your attention to the matter so it can be resolved.

Last week, I visited your department store to buy a new refrigerator. Together with your store personnel, the unit was tested and seemed okay. However, upon delivery and setup, I discovered it was not cooling my food, even after being left on for more than an hour. I immediately contacted the sales representative and had it replaced. Unfortunately, the replacement also has an issue. Though it is cooling the food well, it is always making odd mechanical noises, an indicator that something is wrong with the motor or some other mechanism inside.

I would like you to replace this unit with a refrigerator that is new and in good working condition. And if that is not possible, I would like a full refund. Furthermore, I suggest your staff carefully inspect all appliances before delivering them to customers. As an established department store, I expect good service and products, not faulty ones.

I hope to hear from you soon regarding my issue. You may contact me at 200-333-4577.

Sincerely,

Rowley Parsons

📚 精彩词汇

bring one's attention to引起某人注意
personnel员工
delivery递送
representative代表
replace替换
odd奇怪的
indicator迹象
full refund全额退款

🏗️ 加分结构

同位语从句
...it is always making odd mechanical noises, an indicator that something is wrong with the motor or some other mechanism inside.
that引导定语从句
I would like you to replace this unit with a refrigerator that is new and in good working condition.
if引导条件状语
And if that is not possible, I would like a full refund.