You are a member of a sports club in an old building. Now, all the members are asked to provide suggestions to the manager of the club about the improvement of the club's facilities.
Write a letter to offer some suggestions. In your letter,
1. describe your suggestions for improvement
2. describe what benefits the members can obtain after improvement
Dear Sean,
I understand that you are soliciting ideas on what can be done to improve the facilities of your health club. As a longtime member of the club, here are some suggestions that I would like to offer.
For safety reasons, I think that more lights should be added to the parking area. I found the lighting outside the building insufficient when I was heading towards the parking lot one night after exercising. Also, you definitely need to purchase more treadmills as the available workout equipment is quite limited now. Those machines are almost always full and there is often a wait to use them. Finally, providing more lockers in men's dressing room will save people from constantly competing for lockers. In this way, I do not need to arrive at the club before 7 am in order to make sure that there is still a locker left for me.
If these changes are made, the health club could be safer and more convenient for all members.
Sincerely,